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...a lustful soul, lost in transcription...

Thursday, June 21, 2007

ffs


Floating around like an empty bag,
Only to become everyone's gag.
Rural being outside perspective,
Fighting the urban that is so selective.
Using more and always getting less,
Casual habits that make your life a mess,
Kilometers of struggle with no beginning or end,
Stroking your ego and making you bend.
Aching to see a bit of light,
Killing all cells that could be bright.
Emphasising the "you", all that is bad,
Sucking your thumb, with nothing to add...

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i really like this poem...it seems more like emptiness and unfufillment, but always grasping for something that seems unreachable, or even versing our inner selves..u have alot of talent!!!

Monday, July 02, 2007 3:11:00 pm  
Blogger Mr KOOLL said...

well, "Anonymous"...many thnx!

I write when life makes physical contact with me (be it a touch or a punch), yet in exchange I hope my writing somehow touches people...

Tuesday, July 03, 2007 4:27:00 pm  

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